Please comment on this song I wrote! Please!?

Okay, Im 13. I dont wanna be a rockstar but i wanna be a singer. I think your song has potential. Dont listen to what other people are saying about you needing a chorus or it needing to be longer. Maybe you dont wanna be like all the other rockstars n'; artists. You wanna be you. Just because it doesnt have a chorus doesnt mean its a horrible song. For this being your second song you've written I think you did pretty good. Maybe if you added an instrumental part in there of just solos and things, it would be better. I could totally see this being a video and a good one at that. Dont give up, You got it. keep going! ^_^