Sunday, December 18, 2011

What's a good name for my story?

it's about a female dog named Lie. She lives with a bitter old man who constantly gets drunk and abuses her. He even starves her because he is too lazy and forgets. The reason he is so bitter and vile is because he is very lonely. He is not married and he has never had children. His family never visits him and he is very poor and struggling with money.He picks up random stray animals off the streets to keep himself company because he is so miserable. Then he realizes the responsibilty that goes along with it and he just neglects them until become very weak and sick. Lie is one of these animals who he neglects. She is forced to put up with him everyday. The only friend she has is a very old and wise dog named Bruce. But then he later on dies because the evil old man beat him to death. The man eventually dumps Lie on the highway because he is sick of her. She finds a family and lives very happily with them. She soon forgets about the old man. But then one day she is on a walk with her new owners and she sees the evil old man on the streets begging for money. Apparently, he got so poor that he could no longer pay for his home and he became homeless. Lie remembers the old man and all the pain that he put her through. But despite all of that, Lie feels sympethetic for the Old man and her hatred for him is gone because she puts herself in his position. They share a moment on the street while they remember each other and Lie actually understands him.

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